Fiction Fragment: Stainless steel and initials

Her Mother came with a rather empty suitcase. And a sullen expression. How else would mothers of about-to-be divorced daughters come? But contrary to Kamakshi’s expectations her mother is rather understanding. It was one thing to deal with the emotional upheaval, but the sheer logistics of moving out the house was proving too much for her already frayed nerves. How was one to decide what belonged to the wife and what was rightfully the husband’s?

The apartment was now littered with half filled cardboard boxes. Her clothes, her music, the books. Every object that finds its way into a box fills Kamakshi with some pain. Her Mother is surprisingly deft though. In the kitchen, Kamakshi lets her eyes rest on the stainless steel utensils, still gleaming. Evidence that not much cooking had been witnessed here. She wonders if her Mother will notice how new they all look. She’s doubtful about packing these though. From Kamakshi Mahalingam, she had become Kamakshi Natrajan. All the utensils were initialed with a K.N. Even the stainless steel ladels and spoons had come with her new initials. M and N. Two adjacent alphabets.

Her Mother barges into the kitchen, and begins wrapping the utensils with newspaper. Tumblers, small pans, spoons, dawaras, the large one that went inside the cooker, plates. “There’s no reason why we shouldn’t take these back. They look good as new. He didn’t like eating much at home, did he?”. Kamakshi is grateful that her mother doesn’t insinuate that she didn’t do enough cooking. She wonders how her mother will cope with the presence of a K.N utensil in her kitchen. And how was she to eat out a plate initialed with the failure of a marriage?

The Mother perhaps senses the daughter’s apprehensions. Her hands still busy she says, “Not to worry. We’ll find another boy whose name starts with an N. We won’t have to get new ones then. No wastage. Maybe a Narasimhan, Nathan, Nasabathy, Natesh, Nagesh. Or even another Natrajan.”.

Her Mother seems happy with the simple, elegant solution. So K.N it would remain.


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0 Responses to Fiction Fragment: Stainless steel and initials

  1. Nilu says:

    Kayya pudichha kalyanama?


  2. Narayan says:

    well thought. i wonder if the initial thingy still exists in modern day weddings. ah – KN also featured on utensils that my mom had.


  3. sajith says:

    Stop writing fragments and give us the full thing. Can’t wait!


  4. reshma says:

    At the rate you are going neha…i doubt it would be anytime soon ! These short interesting pieces that i read on your blog and some others – remind me of kids eating gems after every morsel of food. I feed on these before spending a few hours doing insipid work !


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  6. dipali says:

    practical as well as understanding Amma!


  7. Arati says:

    Or, they could just get the local shop to etch an additional line to the “N” to convert it to an “M”, and she can keep her maiden name initials on it forever….(along with the freedom to decide if or who she wants to marry).